How would you change this review?

[Holis]

How would you change this review to convert better?

Cake Poker Review - Cake Poker Rating

I am interested in what you think

[DealerDan]

- Lot of white space in the top area. I'd at the very least get the logo in there, and some screenshots too.
- Better calls to action all round. I'd be using the traditional blue rather than red for links, and invite people to click and so on. Unless I hover over your current links I have no clue they are a call to action, and it's like you just wanted to emphasize the word "Cake Poker" by putting it in red. I'd say that is the biggest weakness of that review actually.
- Download button beside visit website.
- More detail about the bonus. The site is PokerBonusCodesOnline - be more indepth about the bonus, and have a nice big call to action after it.

Also Cake don't offer Stud or Stud Hi-Lo.

[Unknown Webmaster]

Here is what I would do.


Bigger headlines
Make all the small headlines in the Review part fx. "software" and "promotions" bigger, and group them together.

Something like this

<h2>Cake Poker Review</h2>
[Summary text here]

<h3>Software</h3>
<h3>Support</h3>
<h3>Banking</h3>
<h3>Security</h3>

<h2>Promotions</h2>
<h3>Bonuses</h3>

<h2>Games</h2>
<h3>Cash Games</h3>
<h3>Tournaments</h3>
<h3>Skill level of players</h3>

Stars
Use stars or something similar to visually represent the grade of room and the individual characteristics.

Instead of "Software (8)" it would be "Software ******** ".

Download buttons
Change the "Download" and "Visit site" buttons so they look more like regular buttons.

Big 500$ bonus text
Either put a big image or some big text saying "500$ sign up bonus" somewhere.

[Holis]

Im editing as i read these comments, please check back. I really dont get a lot of time anymore for changes so I appreciate the feedback

[Newjabber]

Are you sure 8 in content links to cake poker is enough? couldent help myself.

I think everything looks good.

[DealerDan]

I still think you are missing the boat on the calls to action. Treat the visitor as an idiot - you know that to get to Cake Poker via your links, they can click on the "Cake Poker" links you have through the review. Does the visitor know that though? You have to guide them. Like in the bonus section, end it with "Click here to read more about the Cake Poker bonus" or whatever. Things like that, where you tell the visitor how to get to the site, and instruct them as to what to do.

Also unless I am blind, you don't mention a Cake bonus code anywhere. This is a major oversight - get your signup code pasted in there a few times, make it very prominent. Especially with Cake due to their tracking issues.

[Holis]

ok thanks dan Did you refresh the page?

[xYassassinYx]

Big improvement, although where you now have the Cake Poker banner, under that I would replace the visit website icon with two screenshots

[Squizzel]

you need more emphasis on the call to action IE download link and website link. and some stuff like "Click here to get your $xxx bonus" "or Download now to start playing poker now" stuff like that. words like "click here" and stuff that promote urgency like "NOW" are great for improving conversions.

Also need more emphasis on special features of software, bonus ammount, bonus code. I would put the direct download link and bonus code box further up.

Also consider removing all navigation to other pages from landing pages, this is proven to decrease conversions.

[Holis]

Squizzel did you not refresh? Ive been making updates on this page all morning