Critique These Poker Dealing Banners for Affiliates

[Spry]

on the landing page Poker Dealer School | Learn to deal poker - The Poker Dealer Training Course I do talk about how much dealers make (or have the potential to make).

I like that call to action kev... i may have to use that on some spots I have text links - i can not change up the words on the banners without paying for them again ( i can change their emphasis and or look/style but not a brand new phrase as that would be a new set of banners).

and since i'm getting critiques here, feel free to smash apart my landing page too (link up top of this post). I think i need a better 'box' to display the course to the potential student... something really sharp looking.

I changed the copy fairly recently to be more 'recession based' as it's main problem and conversions are considerably up. (i need to pull all the numbers). The change to the copy was to provide a solution to recession problem... and thats the message the banners need to convey. - ie normal poker dude has a problem and it is they need money... they see a banner that says since i'm already playing poker... how about parlay that into a way to make money as a dealer... that's the goal.

anyway, like i mentioned in the 1st post the training course is #2 in the poker section on clickbank at the moment and we've got 50% to affiliates, someone send me some traffic and make us some cash.

[CasinoKev]

Hey Jason, just read through most of your landing page. I like it a lot. I once thought about dealing for extra money, and your landing page made me want to all over again.

I agree you should go for a sharper looking box, but that's minor.

One part that did strike me was where you say

The best part... you do not need to live near a casino to make great money dealing poker!

But you don't go any further.

After reading the rest I assume you mean dealing home games or at league events. I would definitely put that information up top. Something like

" you do not need to live near a casino to make great money dealing poker! You can make money dealing for local home games and poker leagues like Sarah P. from California."

And then move her testimonial right below that.

I think that may help clear up the objection of "I don't live near a casino, so I can't use this course".

[Spry]

@Kev - thanks for the feedback on the sales page. I changed up the text a bit not to leave the reader hanging right there and show them how they can make money. Also the banner revisions are in:













Ok, so I think these turned out pretty good and the revisions I requested were implemented. What do you guys think?

Would you put a banner like this on one of your sites?

I do appreciate all the feedback, even the threats of copyright infringement

[domainer]

Those look great, Spry. Much improved over the first batch. Only thing I might change would be on the last one to move "You Already Play Poker" to the top above the girl.

Overall, they're very solid banners now.

[kushmoney]

The banners look good.

[pokeraussie]

The chick in the bottom banner has a striking resemblance to Scarlett Johansson

[CasinoKev]

Much better! I like the changes.

[pokeraffz]

The last one girl is pretty cute XD