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    Default www.downloadslot.org - Review Request :)

    Hi,

    Can you please review my site?

    Online Slots - Play Casino Slots, Free Slot Machines and Slots Bonus

    Any criticism is highly valuated! Thanks.

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    The page loads too slow. Part of the reason is because of the large number of images.

    The font is too small so the content is hard to read. The shade of blue that you're using for your links is so light that I think it's going to hurt your clickthrough rates.

    The content is poorly-written. Words seem to be capitalized at random, rather than because of any normal grammatical rules. I know some people think that doesn't matter, but I know plenty of reputable webmasters who wouldn't link to a site where the content reads like that.

    Your casino "reviews" aren't really reviews. They're advertorials. I know some people prefer that approach, but I think the really hard-core salesy approach to web copy, especially on a page with "review" in the title, is a turn-off to most Internet users. I wouldn't trust these reviews as written, and I don't think most web surfers will either.

    This looks exactly like the kind of site that Google wouldn't want to rank well. It looks like it was written for the search engine for the sole purpose of getting users to sign up for a casino account.

    If you're writing a site about the subject of downloading slots, then I'd think you'd want to provide expert advice and observations about the pros and cons of downloading slot machine games versus playing flash games that don't require a download, or advice and observations about playing slots games that you downloaded to your computer versus traveling to an actual casino.

    I just don't think this heavy-advertising type site is very effective anymore--not from a conversion standpoint or from a ranking well in Google standpoint.

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    Yeah my first thought when I hit the page is 'what should I be reading?' The eye isn't drawn to anything in particular above the fold due to the prominence of tiny text. It loaded quick for me and I don't think there are too many images...only like 10 on the whole page.

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    font size too small

    maybe add all the reviews to the sidebar

    review the slot as a player or for a player .
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    Thanks for all the responses.

    I'm in the middle of getting all the content re-written, it's costing me a small fortune as the guy is highly rated, I am also getting the site re-designed amongst a couple of other things.

    All your advice has been taken on board and will be actioned upon!

    Thanks,

    Wonderkidxx


 

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