Will this convert?

[addz123]

Yes Sir. I know where you're coming from with your oxfam rhetoric so no worries. I originally started this thread to understand if the design itself was ok.

Cheers,
adam

[CK]

I dont like the wordpress theme at all. A basic wordpress install tells me two things. Either this is anothe spam site or the owner didnt bother to have the time or effort to properly put the page together.

I dont stay on basic wp sites unless its a blog.

There are multiple errors you might want to fix within the text. Use spell check before you publish something. I also wanted to add it's best if you try to re-word stuff on your own instead of grabbing snippets from other sites

http://copyscape.com/view.php?o=7813...=39&c=&i=1&r=6

That highlights the same text you used to explain your bonus play through requirements.


Since you've changed the site since posting yesterday here is what I would do if I owned a betfair bonus site

The homepage should be just about betfair bonus. I would have three spots with casino, poker and sports (not on a basic wp install) if thats what your going to do.

At the top I would have a summary as to why the Betfair bonuses rock so much. Below I would expand and have a comparison of why the betfair bonus is better than other sites and believe me when I say you can easily beef that section up to 800 words if you really think about it.

I mean seriously you can deposit $20 and still earn the full bonus. There isn't a poker room out there doing this so USE that to your advantage. Why should I spend my money at Betfair when I can get $600 at FT or $500 at Party. Party bonuses are easy to clear right - so explain to people why they should deposit their money at Betfair and even further it by explaining HOW they can get that bonus easy. Break it down.

each of the secondary pages should be full out details on the bonus, rewards and whatever you can possibly think of. But take your time with it. I dont know if you rushed it or not but there are errors on all of the pages. People will notice this, especially when its in the very first sentance. When finished with the page read it out loud and you will see them.

Not sure if you have rights to re-publish other people's content or if you own this site but thats alot of copied stuff.

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Betfair SNG Strategy |

[addz123]

I dont like the wordpress theme at all. A basic wordpress install tells me two things. Either this is anothe spam site or the owner didnt bother to have the time or effort to properly put the page together.

I dont stay on basic wp sites unless its a blog.

There are multiple errors you might want to fix within the text. Use spell check before you publish something. I also wanted to add it's best if you try to re-word stuff on your own instead of grabbing snippets from other sites

http://copyscape.com/view.php?o=7813...=39&c=&i=1&r=6

That highlights the same text you used to explain your bonus play through requirements.


Since you've changed the site since posting yesterday here is what I would do if I owned a betfair bonus site

The homepage should be just about betfair bonus. I would have three spots with casino, poker and sports (not on a basic wp install) if thats what your going to do.

At the top I would have a summary as to why the Betfair bonuses rock so much. Below I would expand and have a comparison of why the betfair bonus is better than other sites and believe me when I say you can easily beef that section up to 800 words if you really think about it.

I mean seriously you can deposit $20 and still earn the full bonus. There isn't a poker room out there doing this so USE that to your advantage. Why should I spend my money at Betfair when I can get $600 at FT or $500 at Party. Party bonuses are easy to clear right - so explain to people why they should deposit their money at Betfair and even further it by explaining HOW they can get that bonus easy. Break it down.

each of the secondary pages should be full out details on the bonus, rewards and whatever you can possibly think of. But take your time with it. I dont know if you rushed it or not but there are errors on all of the pages. People will notice this, especially when its in the very first sentance. When finished with the page read it out loud and you will see them.

Not sure if you have rights to re-publish other people's content or if you own this site but thats alot of copied stuff.

SNG Strategy

Betfair SNG Strategy |

Hi Kaus, I bought betfairbonus.org very recently, and all the content you're seeing is what came with the site. I suspect the previous owner uses the exact same wording on his other site so that's why - though i don't use copyscape so never realised this.

thanks for your input and warning though.