New poker website - critics and suggestions are welcomed

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Hi all,

After selling mine first poker bonus related website, I've decided to create a new one on another platform. Content articles are still in development.

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[Mark]

Wow, interesting header graphic. Definitely grabbed my attention. I would make sure you have the top poker bonuses listed at the top of the page. People are coming to that site for one reason so you should be able to provide them with that information right away so they don't have to look for it.

Mark

[CK]

I think the opposite Mark. I don't like the header at all and not sure what a chick biting gold has to do with poker really.

If your site is called Just Poker Bonus - why is the first thing I see on the page a slider showing me poker news. You have a small table near the bottom of the page on the right hand side that says Biggest Bonus Offers. Why don't I see that at the top of the page?

I'll be honest - I wanted to leave your site as soon as I landed on it because I wasn't sure where I could find a poker bonus. You need to put more thought into your homepage

Further - it would be in your best interest to write your own material. The AP news thing you did is from the AP site. The tagline for the article is a dead giveaway.

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*For anyone who believes in copyscape here is a good instance where copyscape didnt pick up the copied work above

Im not sure if you own the second site I'm listing but I'm dropping the link anyways. If you own both sites your better to have unique articles instead of publishing the same review on each site. If you don't own the other site and your content was copied I would be trying to remove, but if in the case that you are the one copying other people's work, shame on you

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Same goes for FT.

[addz123]

I think the design and layout is terrible man. What's your site all about? poker bonuses. Yet in order to find any sniff of bonuses, i have to scroll down and see a tiny little table on the bottom righ of your homepage.

You should be shoving the most amazing poker offers and bonuses in my face from every angle! Show me free money in my face!

If it's a bonus site, than give me information on the best bonuses for UK players, best bonuses for US players, best instant bonuses, fastest clearing bonuses, bonuses with least conditions etc!

I dont want to read some boring page at the top called 'poker articles' or news, i can go elsewhere for that.

Use what i just said if you want to make a good site.


also, i competely agree with Kaus. Your site is called JUSTpokerbonus, so why are you showing me everything else unrelated to pokerbonuses? think about it please. Also, don't waste your time writing generic poker content. Write content based on what i just told you. Give your site value for plyers just looking for bonuses.

[Mark]

I think the opposite Mark. I don't like the header at all and not sure what a chick biting gold has to do with poker really.

I should have clarified. It definitely got my attention but it did not leave a good feeling about the site.

Mark

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[CK]

Did you spin your articles? I'm not trying to be nasty but they really don't make sense

Most of your reviews are awful. I'm assuming since you changed the reviews you used someone else's work for your site, and have either spun the articles or hired someone who obv does not speak english. By all means correct me if I am wrong

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"internet portal is not only growing rapidly but still continues to remain reputation" <---- that is poorly written which leads me to think the article was spun.

"Full Tilt offers a good promotion of a true players in the form of various bonuses"

"Ultimate Bet Poker has always pursued an incredible promaktsii" <-------- what on earth is promaktsii

"If you got any friend interested in playing poker,"

If you did write this (which I suspect you didnt), I'm sorry. I don't mean to put you down but would suggest you hire someone. These reviews will play a part in your conversions and they are terrible.

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Also adding - in my last post I said original content - you cant just copy someone's stuff and expect to rank well or do well.

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This includes the poker room.

I'm going on a limb here and will say I think you stole other people's reviews and whipped up a website in a matter of days. I think after it was pointed out you were stealing people's content you used an article spinner instead of putting in the effort to write original reviews. If this is what your doing either quit it or don't ask for help. You cant expect people to help you and waste their time with your website when you cant be ass'd to do the work.

That article would have taken you no more than 30 min to write. And that includes adding more to it with background info on the FTOPS series, past events, etc Instead you take the easy way out and toss it up.

IF YOU WANT TO MAKE MONEY IN THIS BIZ YOU WILL HAVE TO WORK!

If I am wrong - prove it and I will apologize (and delete this post), but I dont think I am

[DealerDan]

Article appears to be spun/stolen from this one:

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That's Simon, aka The Shortstacks site.

[addz123]

I know this is insulting, but I really did start laughing out loud at the full tilt review. I've just reached for a tissue. In my opinion, I'm sure everyone has tried an article spinner at least once, so don't feel too bad. Just make sure you write the articles yourself from now on, and you'll get great help from this forum when you need it.

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[CK]

Article appears to be spun/stolen from this one:

Review of Full Tilt poker and bonus code information

That's Simon, aka The Shortstacks site.

Thanks Dan.

OP - nevermind - your obviously not worth it.