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Fair enough. But I only suggested it because your headline said 'Scam or Not.'

The point, though, was to come up with a creative angle/hook. Not something everyone and their mother, father, aunt...

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Okay...

First thought: this is effing boring.

Just scanning the page ...you have all the standard affiliate headings. There's nothing drawing me in to read. This is what you lead with:
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